I drink the backwash
of hollowed out promises
Is it me, invites indifference
expectations so low, self
gowned in layered shame?
How do I learn otherwise
break this toxic pattern
if not in pursuit of love?
(Tuesdays I borrow from Twitter @Vjknutson. Image my own)
The first line
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Well, you packed a punch with that opening!
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Ha ha. Thanks.
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Wow again! Those first two lines and then the last! Full emotional roller coaster ride in a matter of moments. ❤ (And I can relate…)
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I LOVED the image first! I forgot to mention because of what happened when I got to the words! ❤
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Lol. Thanks!
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Thanks Laura.
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Love this 😀
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Thank you!
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I concur with Rebecca as well!! Just gorgeous, Dame VJ. 💗 I’ve been thinking (and writing privately) along similar lines. Love the last stanza.
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Thanks Lia.
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That first line – Whoa
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Thank you
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Lovely, strong words of power and intent, questioning yet empowering.
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Well said, Rebecca. I concur!
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Thanks Liz
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You’re welcome, V.J.
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Thanks Rebecca
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