I’m being a good girl, Dad
Staying out of sight
Keeping my needs to a minimum
Promise I don’t cry, Dad.
I’m being a good wife, Dad
Cooking all his favourites
Letting him walk ahead
Never uttering a peep, Dad
I’m a perfect background wife, Dad
Just like you taught me; just like Mom
Only no one has to hit me to make me
behave, Dad; I learned it good from you.
(Image my own)
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π£π΄π‘π HI BEAUTIES! SOMETIMES FUSSIONING SHAPES AS STAINS, CAN ACHIEVE AMAZING WORKART AND THESE WORDS ARE SO NICE AND WISE.
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Thanks for sharing!
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You’re welcome and the merit is yours ππ
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oh VJ .. well written.. sadly felt ππ
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Thanks Cindy!
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It had a slight dark undertone to begin with, and then the way it ended resolved it. Really well-written, VJ.
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Thanks Sunra.
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You’re most welcome!
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This is a sad topic, skillfully written. I love that graphic.
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Thanks LuAnne.
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Wowβ¦
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It’s heartbreaking to know this abuse exists, VJ, but sadly it’s reality.
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It is. Thanks Eugi
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Itβs depressing to think this still happens.
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Yes. It is.
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Ouch!
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Yep.
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Great!
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Wow, this is sure some amazing poetry, poignant and the fact as it is for many. What a sad tone and mood.
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Thank you. It is true for too many. We follow what we learn.
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Indeed. Feel most welcome β€
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This is so touching π
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Thanks
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Heartbreak…
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Thanks Amy
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Heartbreaking.
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Indeed. Thanks Sadje
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Sobering poem – I certainly feel its grip!
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Thanks Lynne
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Wow…a lot said here.
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Thanks Heather. How the patterns repeat.
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Sadly, they do.
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I feel this.
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Thanks
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Ya. Right in the gut. True poetic power. πππ
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A heartbreaking poem.
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Sadly, a reality for some.
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Yes.
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