Did you know that life would come to this?
Flattened memories pressed between wax
the essence of our efforts forgotten,
the dreams, so carefully construed, lost.
You leaned toward the conventional,
and I was ever the sentimentalist,
and yet we ended up in the same place –
shadow selves standing at the banks
of our dishevelled lives…
Survivors, nonetheless, tokens
of a a past riddled with so many lies,
so much heartbreak…
We are ghost sisters
haunted, hunting,
unable to step away –
Drawn in,
pulling apart –
all that remains.
(Family Portrait first appeared here February, 2019. Edited here. Image my own)
I felt this. Another similarity in our lives.
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Thanks. I’m sure we are not alone.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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A beautiful poem… more so with my eyes closed, and listening to your voice…!
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Thank you
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That’s a beautiful poem. Very moving.
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Thanks Vinny
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Thanks for sharing this amazing poem.
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Thanks for listening, Anita. Appreciate it.
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Oh, the sister relationship is such an interesting thing. Some sisters are best friends. Others (like mine) are miles apart yet cling to the DNA tendons that keep us together. This is a lovely poem, VJ, that makes me ponder my own relationship with my sister.
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Thanks LuAnne.
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Beautifully expressed, VJ. A moving poem.
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Thanks ๐
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Expressions of heartbreak beautifully shared, VJ. I love hearing your voice.
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Thanks Eugi!
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Beautiful lines, beautifully read, VJ. You sound just as I expected. ๐
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Old and shaky, lol? Thanks Sunra.
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Ha ha! Not at all. Dignified and resonant.
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๐
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This emotional poem reveal the loss of control over the fate of oneโs life. Existentialists beware.
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Lol. Thanks usfman
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How painful and beautifully created, VJ.
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Thanks Jeff.
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Youโre welcome, VJ. Always.
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This is such a heartbreaking poem. Thank you for providing the spoken word version.
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Thanks Liz. I thought it needed a voice behind it.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Very fitting! A hint of synchronicity if you will. I finished reading a short story that has some elements to what you wrote; then minutes later, I listened to your voice read your own words.
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Love it when that happens! Thank you.
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Many more to come I hope
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Beautiful poem and your voice sounds so lovely. ๐
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Thank you!
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So lovely to hear your voice here, VJ. It’s heartbreaking, but something I understand, being by way a bit of “ghost sister” myself. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thanks K.
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O wow, what a deep and moving poem.
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Thanks Paul.
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