These thought processes…
I am inside out, shredded…
on so many levels
out of sync…
hear my own words
nothing but hot air
making me so dizzy
that I’m becoming afraid
of heights….
phobic, actually
Breathe,
I remember somewhere
between gulps of helium
and the hammering
in my head…
breathe…
Platitudes have no place
in this moment
in the inside out
emotionally raw now
So, I’ll quit the words
breathe until I find ground
again….
then repeat.
(Inspired by the prompt of Reena’s Exploration challenge which can found here. Image my own.)
Great
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Thank you!
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How I feel when I have writer’s block: “hear my own words / nothing but hot air /
making me so dizzy”. Good post!
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Lol. Exactly. Thanks.
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Another magical post!
Breathing side by side with you VJ.
Feeling inside out means there is something “waiting to come out”.
Let it..
xo
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Oh, I like that Andrea. Thank you.
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breathe until I find ground — well expressed, VJ.
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Thanks Amy!
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yes, Vj we need to find that balance every now and then..
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We do….thanks.
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We need better words (not platitudes); and if they’re gone for now, we’ll stop with them altogether. Waiting for the better words to come, not settling for idioms, let alone cliches. I see this as affirmation of a kind of mandate for creativity and authentic expression. Great work, if I may say.
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Thank you so much!
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It is true our breathing holds the key to equilibrium, at least I find it so.
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Yes. Thanks.
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Welcome.
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You’re right that platitudes are no help when we’ve been turned inside out.
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Definitely do not work. Thanks Liz.
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Don’t miss this poem. “stop the words’ by VJ Knutson
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Fantastic contribution, VJ!
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Thanks Reena. It was a tough one.
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Yeah, the word play is not commonplace.
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