I search for sustenance
with indifference –
have difficulty navigating
the aisles of available options.
Divorced from former dreams,
I hunger for renewed inspiration,
encounter only loss and confusion.
Goddess advises, and I,
ear-closed irritated,
hear only assertions
of inadequacy.
I exit possibility,
have lost the vessel
that once propelled me.
(Linking up to Reena’s Exploration Challenge #70)
excellent!
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Thanks teri!
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From beginning to end, this piece warrants a standing ovation. Brava!
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Thank you so much!
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😉
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Oh to find that boat, a set of oars, and a new sail………….
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Indeed!
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The title says it all and it just gets better from there. Phenomenal writing, V.J. Also glad it was ‘only’ a dream.
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Yes, me too! Thanks for such positive feedback.
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I exit possibility – is such a powerful expression. It felt like a punch in the stomach.
Thanks for joining in!
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Thanks, Reena.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
‘Closed off’ – by V J Knutson
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Thanks Reena – good prompt.
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Sometimes one needs to find power in the pauses. I hope your vessel finds renewal of energy to discover the possibilities.
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Thanks Olga. This poem came from a dream, not sure it’s where I am right now, but it made sense to me.
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Happy that it was a dream and you can still enjoy your holiday. Arctic vortex hitting here. Not pleasant. Lucky you’re missing it. (-44 tonight with the wind chill) 😦
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Glad we are missing that – sorry you are dealing with it. It’s going down to 2 here tonight, which is unusually cold, so must be a far-reaching storm.
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Maybe your vessel is in dry-dock getting a new coat of shiny paint.
Then all ready to go. 😊 .
miriam
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Now that would be good. She’s getting pretty worn down, lol.
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