Teach me reverence;
I am losing ground
Children adulting,
mothering in a void
Teach me acceptance
disability’s waters flood
I am in the margins,
an afterthought…
I concede life changes
release control…
Passion begs an outlet;
I am worn…
And I am open…
Teach me.
(Teach Me first appeared here January 2020. Edited for this edition. Art my own)
So powerful
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful open hearted poem and lovely artistry 😍🤗🥰💐💕✨
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Thank you!
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Same wave length for sure, V.J. I feel like it’s ground hog day half the time❣️
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Lol
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Very creative with a powerful message!
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Thanks so much
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releasing control is a toughie for most but awesomely rewarding … parenting is the toughest job of all 🙂
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It sure is! Thanks Kate
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Oh wow this reminds me of a sermon. I love it!
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Thank you!
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“I am in the margins” – a perceptive way of seeing yourself
Love the art work. A portion of it reminded me of Georgia O’Keefe, (compliment)
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That’s so nice. Thanks. Disability does set us in the margins. We are forgotten socially, politically, and culturally. Interesting viewpoint, for sure.
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I love how “teach me” is used in this poem, particularly in the first line.
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Intense feeling in this poem. Writing is the outlet and I relate to what you write.
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Thanks I.V. Grateful to have this outlet
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I can hear the anguish in this……but acceptance is always the key.
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Acceptance is key. As is being open. Thanks
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Such a beautiful poem VJ
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Thanks Sadje
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My pleasure 😇
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I enjoyed your use of line. The transition from I am in the margins to I concede life stages has that double innuendo. In our twenties we never imagined these thoughts would become our contemplations.
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You are so right! The irony of life. Guess this is wisdom 🙃
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Conceding changes…in the margins…powerful and poignant, VJ. ❤️
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Thank you!
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Huge hugs Vj! xox
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Thanks so much.
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You’re very welcome 💞💞
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