Shadows stalk our conversations,
hovering between lines spoken.
Mother fears death and I,
sidestep darkness…
It’s delusional to believe
we can think ourselves well
or avoid pain by seeking only light
I chew on my words
not wanting to inflict harm –
have done enough of that over the years
Pray for peace to guide her passage
the reassurance of forgiveness
love unconditional
Times like this, language
is sorely lacking, we stumble
build sentences, capture moments
Tell ourselves it will be enough.
It won’t be in the end.
It never is.
(A found poem, borrowed from a previous post, July 2019, on One Woman’s Quest II. Submitted for Eugi’s Weekly prompt: peace. Image my own)
Shadows stalk our conversation, hovering between lines spoken …..wow this is so deep …I love it
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Thanks so much
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Do u realize how deeply your words flow…. I am stunned… I am writing a play and with due respect I humbly ask for ur permission to borrow some lines…. I am so in love with ur work..
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Thank you. Guess that comes with old age. If you can let me know what you are borrowing and give credit that would be appreciated. What’s your play about?
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Just want to borrow a line ….I am studying how to develop story from any pick up line ….it’s an assignment but of course if I pick a line from someone’s work it has to be with permission
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Always happy to support education. Sure. Will you post it later?
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It is on Facebook…but yes once it’s gone thru screening I will post it. If you are on Facebook We could connect and I would appreciate your insight on my work….ur writing inspires me and I am eager to learn from you
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I’m not a big Facebook user -mostly for people I can’t reach anywhere else. Leave me a link and I’ll look.
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No problem…. I will make it easy…once I am done I will post in on my blog here ….do have a blessed Friday and May the weekend ahead bring you lots of beautiful blessings.
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Your poems are hauntingly beautiful 🖤
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Thanks 🙏
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“It’s delusional to believe
we can think ourselves well
or avoid pain by seeking only light”
Wow. The number of times I have sprouted these sentiments …
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It’s fed to us through psycho-babble, but life isn’t quite that glib. Thanks Ju-Lyn.
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And it’s scary how much of it we buy into and tangle ourselves in all sorts of messes!
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The last 2 stanzas speak volumes about not releasing emotions as we would like. I find this very relevant to my feelings when I lost my mother. Mind-stirring piece and thank you for joining in, VJ!
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Thanks Eugi.
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My pleasure, VJ!
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Beautiful. Really captures that difficult and painful time between parents and the children caring for them at the end.
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Thanks Deborah. Appreciate your comment.
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I love the restraint contrasted with the strong emotions inside the poem.
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Thanks LuAnne. Appreciate that you recognize that.
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This line is amazing – I chew on my words
not wanting to inflict harm –
have done enough of that over the years! 👏
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Hope those no calories in all those unspoken thoughts, lol. Thanks.
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Well it is sugar free! 🙂
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This is quite beautiful! I’m only recently starting to appreciate poetry! Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks for taking time to read and comment.
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Strong words that hold within them so much emotion unspoken. Beautiful writing VJ!
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Thanks so much Anne
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Oh that last stanza! Words jumbled with our feelings can be tricky things.
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They sure can. Thanks Heather
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You’re welcome!
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The dilemma of denial
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Isn’t that the truth. Denial is such a powerful coping mechanism.
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My mother is a pro, too!
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Thank you for the affirmation, Liz
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You’re welcome, Derrick.
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Amen!
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