“…too young to notice
how fear persists, and how
the anger that causes fear persists…”
– Immortality, by Lisel Mueller
Purposeful, this fortress
permanently ungrounded
Burdened without bearing
fear underlying motivation
Reassured that life is unfair
dedicated to defying limits
Challenged by rage
bloodline ingrained
Pulled towards inevitable
complete collapse.
(Inspired by the promptings of Reena’s Exploration challenge. To see the full poem and prompt click here. Image from personal collection.)
Your poem expresses so well the power that our ingrained bloodline has over us.
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Thanks Liz. It certainly does.
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There’s this contradiction of will against nature!! Great poem, V.J.!
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome!
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Awww! I love it! Great poem VJ! xo
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Thanks friend.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Familial legacy … by VJ Knutson
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Defiant in approach
Head bloodied, but unbowed
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Yes! Thanks.
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