My house is in order!
I shout to a cosmos
intent on ignoring my pleas
chthonic forces insist
on invading dreams
psychic locks ineffectual
no barriers to protect
when soul mocks
purported equilibrium
Order, spirit answers,
is a temporal concept;
continue to grow.
(For Ragtag Community’s prompt: temporal. Image from personal collection.)
Very effective! I really like the image as well.
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Thanks Liz.
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Chthonic is a new word for me and I had to look up the definition. Wow, how superbly you wove this piece around the prompt!
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Thanks Eugenia. It’s actually a very effective word, I thought.
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I agree! I hope I don’t have to pronounce it. LOL
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Lol.
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I absolutely love the conclusion of this poem. What a great observation. Also, thanks for the new word. I had never seen ‘chthonic’ before. I love learning new words. I think this one must take the prize for most initial consonants in a row!
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Thanks LuAnne. I balk at new words – afraid my brain won’t comply – and then write on, lol.
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This was a new word for me as well!
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Hmmm… spiritual star wars V.J.
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Feels like it. Thanks Ivor.
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I feel a magnetic fields strength – powerful energy and resistance in your words!
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Yes! Thanks Gina!
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Chthonic forces huh? I don’t know if you meant this to be funny but its the best thing I read all day, even better that the NY Post. Have you consider wearing a garlic necklace to keep the spirits at bay? Note: garlic won’t work with Italian spirits. 😡
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Hahahaha. It was a prompt word – not my usual vernacular. Happy to entertain, and I prefer to eat garlic – guess that’s why Italians are not affected.
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