Pot-bellied,
am I:
misshapen by age
and gravity – more
rot than plump ripe pear –
still, a vessel for love –
grandmotherly
vase.
(Image from personal collection)
Pot-bellied,
am I:
misshapen by age
and gravity – more
rot than plump ripe pear –
still, a vessel for love –
grandmotherly
vase.
(Image from personal collection)
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This is so beautiful.
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Thank you so much.
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Lovely words! Full of tender humour! It reminds me of the message in a song by Karen Drucker called ‘I am a gift’ which starts with ” I am a gift, no matter what age, no matter how I look there’s beauty in each stage…”
Your poems are simple and deep as well as funny and grounded, … and readable in seconds… just a wonderful mix of qualities! Thank you!
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment!
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Well said! I concur.
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Thanks Liz
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Hi Liz, you might like to have a look at my blog? It’s called withiniswisdom.com
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Just lovely.
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Nothing more perfect! You did make me laugh with the “rot” word…I see beauty! 🙂
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Glad you picked up on the humour, Debra. Thanks.
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Thank you for making this comment about beauty. My immediate reaction to “rot” was to say, no, no, please don’t describe yourself as rotten. I like your perception much better!
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Someone once told me that my writing has an undercurrent of cynicism, Liz. My warped humour, I guess.
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Always a vessel for love. 🙂
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Always!
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I say some softness of grandmother is a plus for grandkids!
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Yes! Thanks
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Lovely!
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Thank you!
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🙂
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I like this image–full of the simplicity of love. (K)
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Thank you!
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