If death is sleep
then surely I am close –
body leaden
refuses to budge,
brain a slow crawl
I would feel something –
remorse, fear, confusion –
but the weight of slumber
has numbed senses,
reaction sludge
only a drum, drum
of heart harkens
life’s continued spark –
What thread of will
keeps me hanging on,
surely sleep preferable?
(Myalgic Encephalomyelitis is characterized by exhaustion after exertion. Β The fatigue is systemic. )
Your poetry is therapeutic for me and I hope for you, as well. I feel survival has become an art we have to master. Have a blessed week ahead.
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Thank you Eugenia. That is high praise. Writing does provide therapy for me – at least the page knows…
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You’re most welcome!
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I’m sorry that you have to deal with so much physically. I am happy that you are able to share your humor, photography and beautiful poetry with us though ππ
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That has certainly been the gift in all this. Thanks Christine!
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Oh my, this does not sound good, VJ–rather, it must wear down body, mind and spirit. Does it have cycles or seasons intermittent when it’s more “active”, or no? Anyway, your poem is very descriptive–really gives me a palpable vicarious feel for what you contend with, thus my prayers remain faithful and fervent. β€
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Thank you, Fleur. I have good and bad days. Used to be everyday, but I’ve crawled out of that hole. Somehow seems worse now when I get a sluggish day.
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I feel for you…I don’t imagine it gets easier with time/ageing. I’ll just keep up the prayers, and try to do humorous posts as often as I can π Much love to you β€
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Appreciate it all!
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No problem, I’m honored to be a long-distance support.
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I would wish abundant energy at any time (all times) for any one (all ones) … self included … and yet? I have a deep affection for napping. When I retired in 2002, NAPS were the top priority. After 33 years of so-such-thing except maybe on an occasional weekend when other duties could be put on hold, NAPS claimed me. And still, I have not napped enough to satisfy the craving. Mine may be a psychological issue (an addiction even).
Wishing you healing slumbers rich in dreams – and (when your body is ready) a fresh burst of energy.
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Thanks Jazz. I have forever been a cat-napper. Strangely, with this exhaustion, sleep eludes me. It’s part of the problem, yet my body feels heavy with it – hard to explain.
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“only a drum, drum
of heart harkens
lifeβs continued spark ”
Still writing good poetry despite the fatigue and honest as always…JIM
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Thank you so much, Jim. So good to hear from you. I respect your feedback.
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This poem really spoke to me. Recovery from cancer and its treatment leads to a fatigue that I wrote about as well – “fatigue/ hits you like a ton of bricks/suddenly you must lie down/even if it means/asking a stranger to move over” I hope for you, this too will pass. Hugs, Sarah
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Thanks Sarah. This is the nature of the disease – often compared to cancer patients or patients with congestive heart failure. Very little energy to spare in a day. Fortunately, if I watch what I do, I can find some balance. Recently, it’s been a losing battle.
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You have a lot on your plate right now. I am hoping the tide will turn for you. I am impressed by your strength of mind and your amazing poems!
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Thank you Sarah. I really appreciate it. I think poetry is a therapeutic for me.
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“the weight of slumber”…your poem really captures the body sensations and reading it made me feel a bit sleepy!
I know when I am exhausted nothing else matters, just sleep pulling me into it
Thanks for sharing the name of the condition. I did not know about this.
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Thanks Betty! You have seen me at my best. Many days I do well to accomplish routine tasks. Those are the days I write whiny poems, lol.
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Thoreau said – Live your life, do your work, then take your hat. You might want to reconsider that hat with the little fan. π π π π π
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Oh yes, that would be good!
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Looking back I see that was a bit insensitive, especially the smiles. I think its the survival instinct. Years ago I tried very hard to blow my head off and just couldn’t do it. It takes a lot for both the body and the mind to truly give up. Take good care V.J.
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No worries Mike. I know you are of good humour, so I expect nothing less. It does take a lot for body and mind to give up. I remember years ago meeting a woman who had this disease for 17 years. She could barely walk from her bed to the bathroom, and putting sentences together took a concerted effort. I met her as a therapist, and was struck by her incredible will to keep going.
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