No Fool Here

We grow our world
under evening light,
all soul charm and dance –
he a gentle father,
nice guy, quiet…

I believed.

But when search neared,
touchy – see a former ruse,
one smile warmed and…
sod off!

(Friday, I visit Magnetic Poetry online – words not my own, but I take responsibility for the construction. Image from personal collection.)

Published by

VJ

Permission to write, paint, and imagine are the gifts I gave myself when chronic illness hit - a fair exchange: being for doing. Relevance is an attitude. Humour essential. View all posts by VJ

9 thoughts on “No Fool Here”

Pingback: Magnetic Haiku | Word-Whelmed Woman
1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  July 27, 2019 at 6:27 pm
  
  Good one!
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person
Fleur McMorrow says:

July 27, 2019 at 4:34 am

I love what you do with this, and am always equally fascinated by your artistic images. Moody. Great job. (I should try the magnetic poetry again…)

LikeLiked by 1 person
1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  July 27, 2019 at 8:32 am
  
  It’s fun, but challenging. Can’t do it with a tired mind, lol.
  
  LikeLike
  1. Fleur McMorrow says:
    
    July 27, 2019 at 6:27 pm
    
    I gave it a shot last night, linked to you 🙂
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
  2. V.J. Knutson says:
    
    July 27, 2019 at 6:28 pm
    
    Awesome.
    
    LikeLike
  3. Fleur McMorrow says:
    
    July 27, 2019 at 6:35 pm
    
    🙂 🙂
    
    LikeLike
ivor20 says:

July 26, 2019 at 10:30 pm

Oh, we so want to believe….

LikeLiked by 2 people
1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  July 27, 2019 at 8:30 am
  
  Yes, the heart is folly at times.
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person

Comments are closed.

Share this:

Like this:

Related

Published by

VJ

9 thoughts on “No Fool Here”