Is it the stillness
of the rock pool
that draws me
again and again?
Authority eludes –
is not my own –
I dodge hawk-eyed
critics, am weighted
down…struggling
to resurface…
Crave tranquil
company, a chance
to breathe…
unseen…
Nature always the key
(Image my own)
I really enjoyed your reading of this beautiful poem and the ending line about nature.
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So lovely, VJ. Thank you. 💝
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Thanks Vicki
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Thank goodness for nature! It’s never failed me.
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Right on!
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beautifully expressed, VJ. I have a rock garden at the back. That tranquilizes me —
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Something about those rocks. Thanks
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Wonderfully said, VJ. I totally agree.
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Thanks Eugi
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Most welcome, VJ.
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Very moving poem VJ
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Thank you, Sadje
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You’re welcome
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Beautifully expressed
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Thanks Derrick
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I does. (K)
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Thanks
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This is brilliant and mirrors directly the way I feel…..
Thank you…
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Thanks Janet
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Wonderfully written, VJ! Have a nice weekend ☺️
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Thank you. You too
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You’re welcome, VJ. Thank you! ☺️
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love this VJ 💜💜
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Thanks so much.
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