Gnarly, these withered limbs,
this vessel more rigidity than flow,
Winter upon me – a permanent clouding
Sunnier days passed –
oh how vivid the imagination
when blue skies met green grass,
no hindrances
Old dreams hover, tethered to fences –
defences to camouflage vulnerability,
offences to keep my paths cleared
Find balance in isolation –
an old tree, past her prime
Would cut loose this precarious hold
on all things fantastical, but
fear the act a harbinger
So, I bide my days
in this frigid limbo,
and hold on.
(Originally appeared January, 2019. Image my own)
I feel an acceptance in this piece, even if a bit sad about bygone days.. You’ve capture the process of aging well, VJ. ❤
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You are right, Susi. No point fighting it. Thanks.
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Understanding reality is better than fighting it. You’re welcome.
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Inspired by the weathered look of winter, I find solace in my one passing of time is how I read this. Correct?
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What is to be done, but accept where we are. Thanks for your thoughts.
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Shades of Van Gogh in the photo I like.
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Thanks
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Powerful, and felt.
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Thank you, Laura
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Such a beautiful poem and imagine
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Thank you!
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I love hearing you read. You have a great voice for reading.
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Thank you for that. My voice has taken a beating from chronic illness, so I really appreciate the encouragement.
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You are welcome. I would not have know that to be the case. It is still very pleasant to listen to.
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I really like your poem. I understand where you are coming from in you lines. I love the old tree past its prime. I hope no woodpeckers are pecking a hole in your trunk! :>)
The other day I had to get a tooth pulled and it broke in pieces. The orthodontist was literally hammering on my stub so he could chip and edge to grab. He finally got it out.
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That’s the kind of woodpecker I dread. Unfortunately, I’ve been through it a few times, so I can commiserate, Dwight.
Thanks
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:>)
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nice to hear your voice, powerful words!
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Thanks Kate
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Hold on! Or let go and see where that takes you! :0
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Now there’s an idea!
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Wonderful poem and I love your reading of it. The last line is awesome…’holding on’. The earlier stanza with the line where ‘blue skies meet green grass’ illustrates our youth so incredibly well. I also love the image of ‘old dreams hovering…tethered to a fence’. Holding onto dreams matters, regardless of our age or circumstance.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful response, Linda
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This an art and with this poem Anita
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Thanks Anita!
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Beautiful image and words to go along with it!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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Arresting image to perfectly illustrate the poem. Things can get a little to outlast in winter time. But we do march on.
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Yes we do. Thanks Eilene.
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The image has a Van Gogh feel to it. Your words reflect both vulnerability and tenacity. (K)
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Thanks K
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Stunning. Love all the wordplay.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful words and superb image
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Thank you Janet
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Stunning use of metaphor in this one! I love the accompanying image, too.
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Thank you, Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Such wise words – “Find balance in isolation – an old tree, past her prime”!
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😁🙏
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Such a vivid description of the winter. There is no option but to hold on.
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Sadly yes. Thanks
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🥀
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I love the artwork with this poem. Contains all the elements.
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Thanks Heather
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You’re welcome!
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Oh my goodness…”old dreams hover”….thank you for that phrase, VJ. I feel it. And the artwork? I don’t know how you do it or what the technique is…but I love the texture. xo, dear one. 💕
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Thank you. This one is a photo collage.
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Gorgeous!
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💗
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