The Queen is in the swimming pool –
oversized stuffy with a crown
The well is overflowing
and I’m afraid I’m going to drown
Children in the backyard
Stay away from all that’s wet!
The baby is a-coming
and I’m not ready yet!
Please feed the offspring
while I scurry hurriedly about
back and forth to University
trying to gain some clout
Today is my birthday
although you’d never know
I’m so busy skirting circles
with no real place to go
Never have I been so rushed
to get to I know not where
perhaps if I could sit awhile
I’d get from here to there
The Queen is floating upside down
her cardboard crown deflating
It’s time I called off the charade
give this routine an updating
(Image mine. Nonsense poem inspired by a recent dream – sums things up pretty well, I’d say. Not my birthday.)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjl7xtoFp0U Life IS a dream, and vice-versa, I think! lol
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lol. That old song cracked me up. Thanks…Shaboom.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome, VJ! This version is my favorite – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BluVfokUyXs
LikeLike
Haha I think I’m the queen sometimes 🙃
LikeLiked by 1 person
You and me both, lol.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the feel and whimsical real time words that were crisp, well said and “delivered” VJ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Cindy
LikeLiked by 1 person
😇
LikeLike
Quite a good dream VJ😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
It certainly stayed with me, demanding I do something about it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a wonderful way to put your dream into a poem! That too in nonsense verse.
It was amazing! Loved your audio attachment as well 😻
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! 😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
I enjoyed the tension between the light tone and the serious message. It’s very effective.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Liz. Everything is serious in the moment – and often nonsensical in hindsight, don’t you think?
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome, VJ. When it came to my working life, it seemed to be the other way around. Things would seem nonsensical, but then in hindsight they were very, very bad.
LikeLiked by 1 person
To a be a queen – the up and downs! Another great poem!!!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lol! thanks.
LikeLike
Cool poem and it sounds like a dream I could have! And happy birthday, whenever it is!! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lol. Thanks Lisa – not for a few months yet, but it’s a big one.
LikeLiked by 1 person
The queen has always been busy maybe that’s why she’s not been paying attention to the kid drowning and she’s going to drown too. Ha! I had imagined something else from this poem.
I really loved this poem inspired by your dream. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s an interesting take – an aha for me. When I was little I fell in the family swimming pool and almost drown. My mother was upstairs in the house and totally unaware.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! It must have been a bad year for you. I’m sorry about that. Glad you made it out safe and here you are today, sharing your experience with me 👌. I am wishing you wellness to live well for the rest of your days 💌
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you
LikeLike
Great poem VJ, and so perfect for Mother’s Day weekend.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Anne. No one quite understands how complicated a Mother’s life is.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the fourth verse. It reminds of the Queen in Alice in Wonderland telling Alice to run and Alice says that she’s running as fast as she can and staying in the same place. Man, I have felt that way before. I enjoyed this poem, VJ. Sometimes nonsense makes more sense than logic.
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s exactly how it felt. Thanks LuAnne
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love it! Shades of “Alice Through the Looking Glass”… sounds like your went down your own rabbit hole that particular night. Happy non-Birthday. 😉
LikeLiked by 2 people
I sure did! Thanks Susan
LikeLike
I love an image-rich nonsense poem. Thanks, VJ! 😘
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure, Victoria
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha! Dreams make great fodder for fanciful poetry. Now to figure out what it all means.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Think I’ll leave this one where it lies, lol
LikeLiked by 1 person
Life is, sometimes too full of things that don’t make sense, and, we try our best, to comprehend why things happened they way they had, and sometimes, we just, keep, hitting, one, dead-end, right after, another, and another, snd, another…and, we just, can’t, seem to, snap out of, this vicious cycle we are, trapped, by…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lol. So true
LikeLike