Circling,
dancing,
caught between
idealism of expectation
and harshness of reality –
one has lofty goals,
the other invites limitation
I’ve excuses aplenty –
none that assuage ambition
Incomplete work dangles
from spider web threads
waiting for rescue
Talking to myself
unavailing – best
step out of this dichotomy
stop the whirling
(Sketch my own)
Beautiful poem!
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Thank you!
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love the picture VJ and your words are so relatable! 💞
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Thanks!
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💗
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I love these dichotomies that you express in this poem – even if you do want to step out of them. Loved the lines, “Incomplete work dangles / from spider web threads”. What a lovely way to express what is constantly inevitable in our lives.
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Thanks LuAnne.
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💜💜💜
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😊
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I know whereof you speak. I don’t spin nearly as much as when I was working.
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I know – it’s so true. Hard habit to break though
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Definitely.
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Beautiful poem ❤️
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Thank you!
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Love this – “Incomplete work dangles
from spider web threads
waiting for rescue”
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Thank you.
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Good morning, VJ, I clicked through to your website to see the full piece of art. It is gorgeous! I especially love the lady (you) in the bottom left corner. Her hair piece is very cleverly done to look like a crown, but on closer examination, I see it is a crown of flowers growing. Right now I’m in the process of making the leap from organic artist to computer artist. I’m excited about the possibilities when I see the mediums available to me. 🙂 Anyway, I love your words and images.
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Thanks Susan. There are so many possibilities.
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Beautiful poem and sketch💖
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Thank you!
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I so love a graphic, black and white sketch. This one perfectly conveys the ‘dangling’ and the ‘whirling’. Thank you, VJ! 🥰
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Thanks Victoria
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I can so relate! Lots of dangling over here.
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Lol. Thanks
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You’re welcome.
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