Burrs of misadventure cling
I am not beholden to them
Progress, not always visible
requires breathing room
Tenderness heals wounds
patience guiding movement
One by one, I extract the hooks
sigh with each deliverance.
(Image my own.)
Burrs of misadventure cling
I am not beholden to them
Progress, not always visible
requires breathing room
Tenderness heals wounds
patience guiding movement
One by one, I extract the hooks
sigh with each deliverance.
(Image my own.)
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Loving the last line of this piece! As a misadventured burr remover, I feel the deliverance.
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Yeah. Glad you feel it too!
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Lovely, especially first line!
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Thanks 😊
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Such power in these words.
“One by one, I extract the hooks….”
Loved reading it
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Thanks so much
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I love the metaphor. Facing past and present one step at a time.
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Yes! 😊
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❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks 😊
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🌷
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Wonderful
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Thanks
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Marvellous the way you have penned
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Thank you!
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Cockleburs or regular Burrs, it makes a difference. 🕵️♂️
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Oh, you always make me laugh – I’ll have to stop and ask them.
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Definitely takes a lot of patience to see what will come with the extraction of each of life’s painful hooks. Love the image. Brings back memories of taking walks in the bush and getting them stuck all over my pants. 🙂
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Days when we were not afraid of burrs. Thanks Olga. Hope you are well.
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I’m on hold right now. Waiting for a surgery date. Hope things are going well for you.
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Is so hard right now with COVID – everything seems to be put off – except my husband. His knee reconstruction did not hold. He is in hospital again, surgery last night. I’ve been waiting for tests – looks like August will be my time. Take care.
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Sorry to hear about your husband’s medical situation. Hope the recent surgery works out for him and you. Must be stressful. 😦 My time may be August also. One day at a time.
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One day at a time is right. Thanks.
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Such a strong poem with wonderful imagery throughout. Wow.
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Thanks so much and it’s nice to meet you!
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I am becoming a big fan of your words and images.
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Thank you so much! Best compliment ever.
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Definitely a fine metaphor
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Thanks Derrick!
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Is it about “ageing” or my understanding is compromised?
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That is certainly one of the layers, but also coming to terms with a less than perfect past when life trips me up and I can’t run anymore.
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I can feel you. Truly touché
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😘
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Great image and metaphor.
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Thanks Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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Excellent use of metaphor. I love the last two lines.
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Thanks Liz.
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