Stalwart evergreens
like sentinels guarding
passage – this road
at times treacherous
has tested faith
The wind taunts
threats of storms
and still, the tall pines
stand their ground
steadfast harbingers.
(Image my own)
Stalwart evergreens
like sentinels guarding
passage – this road
at times treacherous
has tested faith
The wind taunts
threats of storms
and still, the tall pines
stand their ground
steadfast harbingers.
(Image my own)
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Beautiful artwork! ๐ธ
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Thank you.
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Very nice!
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Thank you!
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Welcome!
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We have some similar themes! I’ve written them a few times as sentinels too. Now I’m wondering if anyone might, who sees them regularly. They are just like that aren’t they!
But the most interesting part of your poem to me is in the last lines of each stanza – “tested faith” vs “steadfast harbingers”! It’s pretty dang clever! The second proves the first in a sense. And in its entirety, the poem seems to view the sentinels as neither good nor evil, but that they could be either.
Beautifully done, as always. Soul sister! ๐ฏโโ๏ธ๐๐ค
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Thanks LIa! Soul sisters for sure!
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I know that road.
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I think it is well-travelled.
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Wonderful pic
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Thanks!
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The steadfast sentinels of green always make me feel reassured. This resonates for that reason. What a lovely image you included.
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Thanks Ali.
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Lovely imagery ๐
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Thanks so much!
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Beautiful image!
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Thanks Sandy!
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You are most welcome.
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I love the image and the metaphor!
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Thanks Liz
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You’re welcome, V.J.
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Your creative talents and perspectives are gifts. โจ Thank you for sharing them with us.
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So nice of you to say Michele. Made my day.
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You deserve the praise, and more. ๐
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Such roads do shake up the thought process ๐
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They do indeed.
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Strong image created in words and art.
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Thanks Heather
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You’re welcome!
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Love your artwork.
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Thank you!
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Welcome ๐
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