This outer toughness
just conditioning
a baby alligator
that’s me
Raised in a swamp
Eat or be eaten!
family mantra, and
Deal with it!
I know it’s a lot
to take in
see the disbelief
in civilized eyes
Resistance to oppression
begets deeper wounds
Fear taught me well
Survival, they say, of the fittest.
(For Reena’s Xploration challenge: featured image is prompt.)
captivating poem, great work !
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just supporting a friend through this now … oppression has trounced her but hopefully she will let us help her to escape π¦
Nobody should know this, baby alligator or not!
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Sorry for your friend. The resources she has gained surviving oppression will help her succeed.
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I believe she will get thru fine if she only take that first step … thanks VJ!
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Ah, yes, that first step….
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this is the first time she has even considered it but I somehow doubt she will ever take it …
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My mother never did, even though as a teenager I found her an apartment and a lawyer. Denial is a coping mechanism too, I later learned.
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she is no longer in denial, religious indoctrination and fear hold her prisoner …
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It takes so much to be free at times. Easy to understand why some don’t make it.
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she’s made a huge step agreeing to a weeks holiday with two kids… pray she gets to her nephews wedding too! They are huge steps which will have impact one way or another
I’m praying he’s all hot air and backs down when she calls him out …
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Oppression’s Child ……. by VJ Knutson
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I like how you juxtapose ‘civilised wisdom’ with native survival skills. Resistance begets deeper wounds – is a very deep statement to ponder on. Abuse prospers on this base.
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Thanks Reena. Abuse has long lasting effects for sure.
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Survival of the fittest unfortunate for children to endure. And we wonder why we as adults have inner turmoil. Superb poem, VJ.
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Exactly. Thanks Eugi.
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“Eat or be eaten” should not be mantra for children–or adults, for that matter, but especially not for children.
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Isn’t that the truth! Unless you are a baby alligator, I guess.
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I like this, because it feels like it’s getting through layers. Good to understand this background perspective. There is this telling and original line: “Resistance to oppression
begets deeper wounds”
Wow. True that. I can relate. ππ
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Thanks for your thoughtful feedback Lia.
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Amazing. Such a chilling response to that image. Wonderful words V.J.
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Thanks Anne
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I love the baby alligator as a symbol!
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Thanks Betty. It was a dream I had. Interesting symbol.
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Brilliant write! π β€
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Thanks Deborah!
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All that pressure…great response to the prompt
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Much going on here from the start; the poem feels like it wants to survive. Also, a strong merger of words: “civilized eyes”
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Thanks Benjamin. The poem evolved from a nightmare. I’m sure it has more to say.
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Well, perhaps there will be second part to it. And hopefully less nightmares, though.
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‘Eat or be eaten’ true words!
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Thanks.
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