Remember that time
wading to the caves
St Martin’s summer
How the tide rushed in
Atlantic pulling us apart
my body weak with laughter
How you shouted, coaxed –
once ashore we collapsed
wet but warm, hearts flooded.
(My brother and I weren’t raised together, as his father abducted him at age 10. Reunited years later, I treasure the moments we get to spend together, even though they are few and far between. Image my own.)
Heartfelt and special, what a treat to be invited into your world. I love how you transform sadness into joyous memories.
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Thanks Paul. In our senior years, we are trying to weave together our stories to make sense of it all.
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Yes, so true VJ
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Thank you for sharing your memory. Beautiful image, VJ.
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Thanks Amy
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Lovely memory in your poem–and beautiful image, too.
I’m glad you were able to reunite–what a story!
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Thanks Merril!
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You’re welcome!
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wow!!
Amazing piece
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Thanks so much. Enjoyed visiting your blog. Now following.
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Thaankk youuu so much
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My pleasure!
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Beautiful poem V.J.
Happy 🐣 Easter.
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Thanks Margaret. To you too!
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“my body weak with laughter”..I bet you smile every time you think of this memory!
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I do!
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What a wonderful poem. Reminded me of my brother. He’s many years older than I am and so there are fewer memories I have of our childhood together. nevertheless it’s a lifelong bond which I cherish dearly.
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Yes, my brother is 11 years older, although that makes no difference in our senior years.
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Sweet memory suspended in time. Making up for lost time too perhaps.
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We don’t see each other often- he lives far away – but our time together is aways rich.
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That’s the important part 🙂
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Powerful poetry and an even more powerful story VJ. It’s like the universe has broken you open in so many incredible and difficult ways – so that you could become the poet that you were always destined to be. Grateful for you. And your words. Happy Easter my friend. Andrea xo
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Wonderful words, Andrea. Have a safe and peaceful Easter!
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Very beautiful V.J.! ❤
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Thanks Deborah.
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You’re welcome! ❤
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Wonderful poem
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Thank you!
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Oh, what a wonderful poem! It reminds me so much similar times with my brother.
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Glad you could relate, Liz. It was time for a heartwarming post. Thanks for sharing.
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