Sun blazes before it falls,
slashes the day’s sky –
blue guarding against blaze.
Golden grasses absorb
the fire, brazen in their
clay-baked fields.
Branches blacken –
forlorn bristles –
stark against light.
I stand on the precipice,
day’s end beckoning,
taunting, my spirit alive
Will blaze before it falls,
lashing against the heavens
who dare to threaten darkness.
Nice post β€ amazing pics!
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Thank you. I checked your blog – looks like you are just getting started. Wish you well.
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yes just couple of months back!! you feedback will be very inspiring!! β€
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Be patient. Commenting on others blogs is a good way to start and get follows. Some of us are put off by aggression, so relax a bit. It takes time to build a community here.
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point taken ma’am π
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You have an ambitious start, and in time will find a direction that elicits a following. Keep going.
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Sorry, it’s the school teacher in me coming out, lol.
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Beautiful poem ! Exceptional imagination ππ
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Thank you so much.
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You create a stunning image. I’m a sucker for a beautiful blazing sunset – I love sunrises as well. Lovely.
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Thanks LuAnne.
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I love how you painted the sky with your words VJ…i can just close my eyes and picture it out after reading..
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Thanks Mich – a gracious compliment.
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I hope it keeps blazing for some time to come! Wonderful imagery!
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Thank you, friend.
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Pleasure!
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Precipice … closing of a day, closing of a life … either case, I like the thought of spirit blazing before the darkness.
Thank you for lifting my spirit’s gaze.
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I like to think it’s end of life blaze – we glow better as we age. Thanks Jazz.
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A powerful and beautiful piece, VJ. Love the image as well.
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Thank you. I love that image too – taken from the car after a long day of driving. It inspired the words.
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You are welcome. It is such a beautiful image. Inspiration is everywhere π
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