Dispensable

In my absence
dreams flourish,
friendships form,
enterprises thrive

In my absence
opponents clash,
decisions falter,
differences grow

All that was viable,
all that motivated,
all that defined…

Now vapours –
truths forgotten –
in my absence.

(Jilly is hosting is in the dVerse pub tonight where repetition is the challenge.  I am combining this with Fandago’s Word of the Day, opponent,  and Ragtag Community’s prompt, friend.)

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29 comments

  1. Sobering truths in this and I like your unique use of repetition. It made me think of All That Jazz, which, of course, changes the usage of ‘that’, but somehow still works in this one brain 🙂 Thanks for sharing!

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