I miss your wisdom;
could use some about now,
confidence lacking
Life’s what you make of it,
you’d say, and
You’re doing a good job…
Truth is, I’ve made a lot of mistakes –
call it stubbornness or stupidity-
but I failed to plan, Dad
Not bemoaning life
It’s been really good
and I know you did the same
I’m just tired of doubting my self
Watching the rest of the world
reach their goals and then retire
While I can never tell –
am I doing a good job
am I even appreciated?
Remember the day my marriage died
and I came to you, crumpled
spewing anger, defeated…
And you cried with me
raging on my behalf, said:
Goddamn it, you deserve better than this!
Funny that through all the pain
your walls, my walls
you, alone could see me
Tragic how I only understand that now
death and years separating us –
my need for you still raw.
(Image my own – cut and paste with AI)
I’m sad for you that you are doubting yourself, dear VJ. ((hugs)) There will be better days.
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Thanks Susi.
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You’re welcome, dear.
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It’s heartbreaking that death separates people, but take comfort to know that he left you a good memories and lessons you can remember and rely on whenever you feel Lost. Hope the presence of him in your heart will guide you through life.
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Thank you
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This is a beautiful and touching tribute. Your words capture the pain of loss and the enduring love between a child and parent. It reminds us all of the importance of cherishing loved ones and the strength we find in their memory.
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This is a beautiful and touching tribute. Your words capture the pain of loss and the enduring love between a child and parent. It reminds us all of the importance of cherishing loved ones and the strength we find in their memory.
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Thank you.
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Its such an expressive piece. And listening to the recording makes it more heartwarming!
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Thank you.
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This is moving .. had tears while reading 🌻
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment.
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VJ, this is truly lovely and impactful to many readers. Nicely done. Keith
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Thank you, Keith
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How well I relate to this, VJ. I had the same experience when my first marriage ended; my father was fuming. It has been years, but I always wonder
how he thinks I am handling things. He never had a bad word for anyone,
except my ex.
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Smart man. 😊
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Nothing I can say here. That last line of yours- sadly something I will forever relate to. Love, love, and more love, dearest VJ. 🫂
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Thank you so much, dear Isha
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Oh, this is heartbreaking, VJ, but very telling in that you had a wonderful father. Sometimes, we don’t realize things until our loved ones have moved on. Thank you for opening your heart.
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Thanks Lauren.
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Oh, VJ. This is heartrending. I am so moved by your sharing and your words.
~David
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Thank you, David
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How wonderful that you had such a great father. Mine is the same.
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Thanks Roberta. I did not think he was so wonderful growing up, sadly.
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Well, I think we all appreciate our parents more when they are gone.
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For sure!
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So moving! Thank you for the reminder to appreciate the advice of our loved ones while we can, Linda xox
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Thanks for stopping by Linda.
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Your father clearly offered you many gifts. How fortunate you were!
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Thanks Eilene.
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So much we only understand in retrospect. A loving tribute. (K)
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You are so right about that. Thank you.
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beautiful and moving
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Thank you!
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I was very moved by your heartfelt poem.
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I’m glad it touched you Liz.
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I’m glad your soul continues to blossom as you remember the sound advice from your dear father.
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Thank you. What a wonderful thought
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Some pains refuse to go away and our regrets keep them raw. Very moving, VJ. We must be kind to ourselves. ❤️
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You are so right. Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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Hugs, my friend. Be good to yourself. You deserve it!!
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Thank you so much, Julie
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It is amazing what death and years bring to us! We think we have something sorted and then boom…..more layers are revealed. Your father sounds llke a lovely human being
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Thanks Janet. He was a very tortured human being, actually. But at the same time, he was wise beyond my childish understanding, and could be deeply sentimental. I appreciated him too late.
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I am sure that the tortured element of him contributed greatly to his being so wise. I think we all appreciate certain things later than we might have wished.
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Wisely said.
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touching and moving tribute, V.J! 💗
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Thank you Cindy!
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You’re so welcome VJ! 🩷
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Heartwarming poem
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Thank you!
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Thank you, VJ….this went straight to my heart. Especially the image of your dad crying with you, being your champion. xo, dear one! 💕
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Thanks Victoria.
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❤️❤️❤️
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It’s often that we realize our love for our parents when they are gone.
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Sadly true, Sadje. He was such a difficult man during his life. I just didn’t know how to break through at the time. Of course retrospect brings new understanding.
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Yes it is often the case when parents are perceived to be strict.
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So very poignant.
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Thank you.
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it’s a lovely, moving tribute to yr dad; you were indeed fortunate to have such a father; I’m a dad too: I hope my daughters think of me like that 🙂
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Thanks John.
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