The woman in the mirror is flawed
age spots where freckles once sprouted,
streaks of white, peppering former auburn,
inner scars marking discontent.
How then is she expected
to know wholeness?
In days when mind was sharp
self-confidence wobbled;
where spirituality was planted,
self-judgment undermined.
The path to wholeness
pitted with potholes.
How often emotion overrode
common sense, and choices
led her astray, how thick
the mud of guilt she mired in.
Repulsed at her own reflection
she was anything but whole.
Less self-defacing these days
she examines the worn bits
with wry acceptance –
acknowledges the toil.
If wholeness is perfection,
she’s ready to let go.
(Image my own. AI enhanced)
Your poem is so real, and thought-provoking. Wonderfully written, VJ.
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Thanks Eugi
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VJ. Your poem is fantastic. I didn’t respond right away but the poem has lingered. And now I understand why. Earlier I had read a poem that gave me pause. Hunted it down. Now I want to share with you. Not in response to yours. Just to share. Hear me out my lovely lady. Poetry Foundation. https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/47541/keeping-things-whole
Bless you. Always.
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Wow Selma, that is thought provoking. Thank you
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A thought provoking poem VJ
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Thanks Sadje
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You’re most welcome
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A very insightful poem.
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Thanks Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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VJ….you really brought this piece home for me…those last two lines? Powerful. Thank you, thank you! 💝
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Thanks Vicki
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Very relatable. Thank you for taking the time to write and share this. 🙂
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Thank you
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Beautiful write VJ! 🌻🌻
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Thanks so much
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