Girls are lucky:
just need to find the right man –
looked after for life.
Advice from a teenaged brother.
Right! I yell back,
fifty years later.
It was all a vacation –
raising the children on my own
looking for God in the midst of chaos
partners with wandering eyes
or absent…always absent…
still waiting for that “looking after”
And how did you make out, Dear Brother?
Oh, that’s right…married…
woman with a good job
willing to let you putter in the background
Guess we were both misled.
(No Idea! first appeared here November 2020. Image my own.)
A perfectly placed line: “Right! I yell back,
fifty years later.” Fantastic! Poetry expert, you are.
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So true.
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😊
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hahahah relatable VJ!
they’ll learn in time haha.
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Lol. 😊
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A powerful piece!
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Thanks Mark
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Wow! You covered so many bases with this piece.
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Thanks Eugi!
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Most welcome, VJ.
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You read this biting poem perfectly!
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Good to know, lol
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Will your brother read this? Or perhaps it does not matter. It is our own recognition and growth that does. Someone said to me that we don’t change this through our daughters, but rather through our sons. I think it’s both.
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My brother won’t read it. It’s just emblematic of an era. Thanks.
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*writing (Friday was loveable also giggle giggle 🥰)
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Yes, the young are so naive!
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Weren’t we? Lol
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Yup, fixed ideas and mostly misleading ones
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Stereotypes we are sold…all have an expiry date. Love your image.
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Truth! Thanks.
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Welcome!
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Words of truth. The world has changed a lot and it often isn’t at all fair or equal.
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Well said. Thanks.
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Powerful writing!
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Thank you!
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