Disregard the obvious –
I know how time has marred me
Disregard the glare –
eyes clouded with cynicism
A fledgling heart beats
within this disheveled nest
Come closer and behold
a childlike yearning for love.
(Tuesdays, I borrow from Twitter. Image my own)
I truly enjoyed this!
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Thanks Kally!
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tender and wise VJπ₯°
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Lovely poetry, VJ ~ thank you for sharing π€
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Beautifully written and very relatable.
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Thanks Eugi π
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Truth π€
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Wonderful poem thank you Anita
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I particularly like these lines; they’re such a powerful metaphor:
A fledgling heart beats
within this disheveled nest.
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Thank you Liz.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Very lovely
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Thanks!
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Enjoyed the powerful ending because you have so much seasoned psychology (write like a counselor)
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Thank you!
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A fine combination
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I noticed the combination today too, Derrick – and the first part had a “Poe-like” vibe — nice ending too VJ
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That is quite a compliment. Thanks Yvette!
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Thanks Derrick
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Good π
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lovely
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Thank you
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Good morning, VJ. Great poem! I can totally relate to this. Thank you.
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Thanks Susan!
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Never judge a book by its cover
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