The Great Blue heron declares me an annoyance
to which the Blue Jays rasp accordance –
I know I am akin to predator
but I come here with need
to this bug-infested
weed-ridden
riverbed
To be
Torn
as I am
by an undefinable
rustle, an inner bleed
that craves patterns, or signs
naturally occurring rhythms to define
my place within this current worldly disorder
(Image my own)
This is beautiful! Your poetry is brilliant! So happy to have found your blog. 🙂
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Thank you so much. Glad you found me so that I could find you.
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I adore herons! Beautiful form, and love the flow in finding stability amidst the chaos.
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Thanks, Susi
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You’re welcome, VJ!
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Stunning, in both form and essence ❤
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Thank you!
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This spoke to me, VJ, and I’ll revisit—and may ask permission to use. Loved the painting
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Thank you!
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Would like to use it/refer to it in an upcoming blog. I think it would tie in nicely. Will attribute to you, of course.
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that picture is marvelous and thought provoking words dear VJ!
💖
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Thanks Cindy!
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Always VJ!💕
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Well said…and “worldly disorder” really struck home. Beautiful image!
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Thanks Andrea. So much discord these days
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You’re welcome. Yes, it’s overwhelming.
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They will hopefully coo in acceptance once they get used to your presence and then let you be you. A beautiful write, VJ.
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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I’m sure humans are the only animals that spend so much of their time contemplating life. It sounds like you have found the perfect place to do just that, even though the residents may not be so welcoming. Wonderful write.
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I am sure your are right, lol, but the heron did seem so annoyed with me, he inspired the poem. Thanks
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😊 You’re welcome.
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Beautiful! There is a rookery near us, the are beautiful creatures!
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Amazing to watch them in the rookery. Thanks.
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I LOVE this!! Thank you for reading it as well.
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Beautiful picture and poem. 🙂
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Thank you!
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