Shunned for her sin
a young figure
rubs her swelling belly
compulsion driven by fear
Tremors from within
stunt her movement
uncertainty paralyzing
her words…
She is unwed,
repulsive to a society
reeking with ineptitude –
righteousness negating action
Unsuspecting, the baby arrives
emits a scratchy cry –
filling her lungs with hope
and anticipation, trusting
Does not know
in her stark nakedness
that her tragedy is set,
life will not embrace and provide
Poverty has marked her
for a life of hardship –
the pious turn their backs
she is, after all, born of sin.
(Image my own)
Very good!!
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Heart-rendingly beautiful, VJ. The sins that have been committed by the pious!
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How painfully sad. I’d like to think things have changed for the better over time, and certainly they have, yet there’s clearly a long way to go. No woman should be shunned and no child should have their lives predestined and limited by circumstances and social prejudice. A hard-hitting piece, very nicely done. xx
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Thank you. Sadly the problem continues.
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This is a heartbreaking poem.
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Sadly, too true for many. Thanks Luanne
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I’m reading “The Girl in the Letter” by Emily Gunnis. It’s fiction, but speaks of the reality of Homes for Unwed Mothers. Your last two lines say it all…so much sin comes from those that believe in sin.
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This poem, like many of mine, came from a dream, but I have also seen it within my familial circle. I’m currently reading The Family Roe, so I think these issues are on my mind.
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So sad and yet, this happens too much.
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It certainly does.
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I love that reminder of how all babies are born “filling her lungs with hope / and anticipation, trusting”. It offsets the poverty of spirit in the pious.
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Thanks Lynne.
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Beautiful image! Not so pretty your poem’s reflection of reality.
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Thanks Jazz.
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This is so heartfelt VJ
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Thanks Mich.
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The pious have always been all too willing to turn their backs.
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