Does the moon envy
sun’s glorified reign –
(gender inferred)
Sons were sun
in my family,
we women lunar
Father straddled
the two – a secret
we fought to suppress
Fluidity of pronouns
non-existant
in formative years.
(Image my own)
Does the moon envy
sun’s glorified reign –
(gender inferred)
Sons were sun
in my family,
we women lunar
Father straddled
the two – a secret
we fought to suppress
Fluidity of pronouns
non-existant
in formative years.
(Image my own)
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Super solid. It has your poetic touch!
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Thanks Benjamin
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Welcome!
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Beautifully reflective of my family life. The complexity is that my mother was the more dominant parent who in fact adhered to the stereotypes more apparently than my gentler father. But, there again, that was the way it was in those days. The woman’s place was in the home. “Fluidity of pronouns non-existent”. A splendid thought-provoking poem
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Thank you, Derrick. Gender science now tells us that few of us are one polarity or the other, which really is a big sigh of relief, I fell.
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Quite so
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So slowly we evolve.
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So true!
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Wow
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Thanks
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Love this..
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Thanks ๐
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There is an undercurrent here–as Lia noted, done with great skill.
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Thanks Liz. I appreciate that.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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I believe you have alluded to a story here that is more common-occurring in society than most know, and at its roots deeply painful, with a great lot of skill.
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Thanks Lia. I’m working on that story, but there are so many layers to untangle.
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Strength and love ๐โค๏ธ
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Bless you
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Moon sure does. “Sons were sun” still holds truth. The fight continues.
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I fear you are right! Thanks.
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You are welcome. Your words always resonate.
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We (i.e. I) liked this very much.
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Thanks ๐
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