Tectonic, the force
required to move
this wall of shame
Erasable, the missives
I write to defend my worth –
pencil strokes that only mock
Unsustainable, the hope
that life should ever receive
my efforts as more than folly.
(Art my own)
Tectonic, the force
required to move
this wall of shame
Erasable, the missives
I write to defend my worth –
pencil strokes that only mock
Unsustainable, the hope
that life should ever receive
my efforts as more than folly.
(Art my own)
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Pure art!!!
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Thanks 😊
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I love the structure of the poem, VJ. It is a compliment to the freedom of the painting. Very interesting indeed.
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Thanks, LuAnne, I hadn’t thought about that.
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Feeling the same way lately.. seeing through so many past illusions.. Powerful.
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Thank you.
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I’m pondering your last stanza…I’m not so sure that hope is unsustainable, I always think it exists even when we don’t admit it to ourselves…Another great write!
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Hope can be a funny thing, can’t it? Sometimes friend, sometimes foe. Thanks.
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It can. You’re welcome.
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Beautifully done… and I can relate to every line.
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Thanks Lia!
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And yet we hope, and we must, I love your honesty in this reflection.
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Thanks Paul.
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In my book “artist” = waaay more than “folly”!
(another intriguing image here)
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Lol…thanks Jazz. I guess I mean folly, as in to what end do I do all this?
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Art affects the recipient in ways the artist may never know … art serving beyond any given intention of artist … trust that you’ve been gifted a way of communicating that benefits others, VJ. (So glad I’m on the receiving end!)
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What a wonderful perspective, Jazz. Thanks for that!
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I love the image.
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Thanks Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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