“What in your life is calling you, when all the noise is silenced,
the meetings adjourned…the lists laid aside,
and the wild iris blooms by itself in the dark forest…
what still pulls on your soul? “
– Rumi
I dwell in silence
meetings adjourned
list groceries
Former self faded
sorrowful shadow
definition slipped
I am the wild iris
pushing forward
in darkness, unseen
In contemplation
future doors heavy
snowy the path
If I follow light
I find promise
a verdant valley
I am guided
no destination
only presence
Physical constraints
merely distraction
I am the message
Light, shepherd
dreamer, woman
warrior, goddess
My soul pulls
invites passage
I am ready.
(Written in response to my weekly challenge – opening quotation. After meditating on Rumi’s words the image emerged and later this poem.)
Wonderful – eco
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Thanks
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Interesting
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I particularly like the movement from unwelcome change to emergence and potential. The image reflects the poem and adds its own depth and nuance.
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, V.J.
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Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
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Thanks!
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Welcome!
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Love this .thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for taking time to comment.
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Absolutely wonderful. Started lovely, built and built and got better and better; then perfect ending.
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Thank you Lia
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This poem reads like a beautiful meditation. Lovely.
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Thanks Michele
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no destination
only presence
Goodness, your peer contemplatives would agree with you! We can be in motion as is the natural world, but like the natural world it’s what we do and who we are in the now of going anywhere (we don’t know where). I also appreciate your poem addressing distraction, the kind of “constraints” that meetings and offices, even our own bodies, might impose. The call to the forest and the flower and to become the flower is the kind of directive our spirits need.
The iris is a favorite flower of mine, so my thanks to you for that and to Rumi. The illustration is striking. All elements live together, here.
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Thanks so much. Encouraged by your feedback
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Thanks for sharing.
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both bewitching and healing, there is power in your words and art! lovely 🙂
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Thanks Kate
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a pleasure, nice to follow your process!
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Meditative-inducing read! Especially: no destination / only presence
Thank you!
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Thanks Jazz. I know you have more experience in this art, so your words are a comfort.
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I’m so intrigued by the artwork. It’s beautiful and evocative. And this: “I am the message.” Yes.
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Thank you Leslie. I appreciate your comment and more than that the opportunity to discover your own work.
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Such beautiful raw truth and the artwork speaks volumes of what you wrote! Poetic excellence in motion! 🙂 ❤
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Thanks so much Deborah. Really appreciate your feedback
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❤ !
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Ready for what I ask hesitantly?
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Hesitancy is wise counsel, Mike. Short answer life. Long answer will have to wait.
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These are pure feelings emerging from the soul. Both the art and your words are seamlessly woven together V.J!
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Thanks Radhika. This exercise was powerful for me.
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Exceptionally beautiful words and image…thank you:)
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Thanks Janet!
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Powerful words! Each time I read it, the pull gets stronger. Great write!
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Thanks Heather. That quotation sure stirred me.
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You are welcome!
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the poem? polished pebble! the illustration? ace!
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Thanks Nick. Means a lot.
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The artwork is beautiful.
Words are awesomely weaved.
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Thanks so much!
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Pleasure 🙂
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