She amassed children while
he pursued accolades
Family photos display
northern shorelines
tanned faces, white-toothed grins
parents not represented
Lost her childhood
at the bottom of a ravine
laid beaten and shattered
no one came to rescue her.
Guess that’s what drew her
the his light; money, she hoped
would not abandon her.
But muck tracks the same
and children need feeding
and absent a co-parent
she sleeps most days.
Offspring learn independence
a product of adults’ disarray
outlasting the fickleness of fame.
(For Reena’s Exploration Challenge: prompt is the last line of the poem. Image my own.)
Yep.
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Lol. Thanks.
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Heart-wrenching.
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, V.J.
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a very sad story, and as Reena said a roller coaster without a happy ending.
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Thanks Heather. I often think we marry so young – before enlightenment can guide us.
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As the song says..”fools rush in”
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Ah, yes!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Spotlights Burn ….. by VJ Knutson
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The pathos you build in the journey is awesome. It is a roller coaster of trauma, hope and disappointment.
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Thank you so much for that feedback, Reena.
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Awesome.
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Thank you!
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This is so true to many
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Sadly. Thanks.
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This is powerful…sort of hit me in the stomach!. Thanks Janet.
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Thanks Janet. (Not entirely fictional, lol).
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I suspected. our best work is usually inspired by deep personal experience.
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