Can’t take responsibility
for what gets laundered here
my vehicle has no steering wheel
I am merely seeking understanding –
comfort, like support shoes –
and I get flack, indifference
slapping me in the face.
Why did I put myself in this position –
revert back to old ways, think
I was destined for anything
but penniless devotion –
should have been a nun.
(Image from personal collection.)
love your words and your image is outstanding.
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Bless you, Wendi!
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🙂 thank you
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Made me laugh VJ
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Good to know. I can be darkly cynical. Thanks Brian.
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Wow! This is superb!
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Thank you!
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Love Love love this….Your poems are so universal!
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Thank you…best compliment ever!
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V.J.,
What stunning imagery from your beautiful mind –
Your experiences resonate deeply
A lovely Sunday to you.
am:)
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Thanks so much, AM. So nice to hear your thoughts. Enjoy your day also.
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Most welcome😊
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There are so many lines I like in this poem – ‘ my vehicle has no steering wheel,’ and ‘ I am merely seeking understanding
Comfort, like support shoes.’ The simile really strikes.
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Thanks so much.
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penniless devotion – oh V.J this was priceless!
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Thanks Gina
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my pleasure V.J
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I really like your line “my vehicle has no steering wheel”
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Thanks Betty. Feels like that sometimes, lol.
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For me, the poem turned on these two line:
I am merely seeking understanding –
comfort, like support shoes –
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Thanks Liz.
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I know a great joke about vegetarianism and nuns but I think it may be inappropriate. 😉
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Actually, it might be applicable, lol.
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Another touching post with beautiful art!
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Thanks Julie!
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I love this! I have said “I should have been a nun” so many times! 😀 ❤
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Lol. Glad it struck a chord.
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