Absence fills the silence
with shadowy wings
becomes a raven
sharp-taloned,
razor-beaked
I cower
loss too
immense
for comprehension
would lay my body down
be consumed, but for
the children’e eyes pinning me
their woeful gazes,
begging to be uplifted
I am abandoned
and not
a flicker
called to be
beacon.
(Art from personal collection)
Wow, the form like butterfly wings, the art and words beautiful.
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Thank you so much.
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Lovely words 😊
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Thank you
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I enjoyed the poem, the art, and the insightful comments!
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So glad, Liz! Thank you!
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Wonderful treatment of the butterfly image. It feels like an old snapshot…an old memory.
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Thanks, Olga. I liked how it turned out too.
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I don’t know how to explain it, but I really liked the line lengths in this poem. It’s as if, your feelings are small or have to be controlled, while the overpowering, silence, demands(needs) of others are greater and you have to attend to that…then again, I could be way off, but I really liked it!
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Thanks Heather for such valuable insight. Sometimes intense grief does not allow for full breaths
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You are most welcome.
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Loss…so tough to wrap words around. But you do it so well and with such intensity.
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Thanks. Based on an old loss revisited.
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful– the art and the poem
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Thank you!
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Thanks!
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love that art of yours – and the words are dense and provocative
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Well said!
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