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Loss and Light

Absence fills the silence
with shadowy wings
becomes a raven
I cower

loss too
for comprehension
would lay my body down
be consumed, but for
the children’e eyes pinning me
their woeful gazes,
begging to be uplifted
I am abandoned
and not
a flicker
called to be

(Art from personal collection)

19 thoughts on “Loss and Light

  1. I don’t know how to explain it, but I really liked the line lengths in this poem. It’s as if, your feelings are small or have to be controlled, while the overpowering, silence, demands(needs) of others are greater and you have to attend to that…then again, I could be way off, but I really liked it!

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