Words are leaves,
poignantly bold
when sprouted,
destined to wither
lose their hold –
thank goodness
our love is a trunk,
solidly rooted, steadfast –
no need for words.
Words are leaves,
poignantly bold
when sprouted,
destined to wither
lose their hold –
thank goodness
our love is a trunk,
solidly rooted, steadfast –
no need for words.
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Rich in meaningful metaphors for love and life.
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Thanks Paul.
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Most welcome VJ
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I love this dichotomy, V.J. After I read it twice, each time taking in a deeper understanding, I noticed the title. Such a beautiful description of mature love. Great place to be.
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…and well earned, lol. Thanks LuAnne.
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Thank goodness our love is a trunk-yes! Apparently that line struck a chord for others too. Lovely.
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Ha ha – it might of crept up on me too. Thanks.
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Reminded me of a healthier twist on the Giving Tree. ❤️
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Oh, nice!
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Love is a trunk???
Love everything about this poem
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Lol! Thank you!
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Trees and leaves
Their life we breathe
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Yes…thanks, Ivor!
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Astute analogy for real authentic mature love. Very nice!
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Thanks!
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Welcome!
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“our love is a trunk”
Love the metaphor!
Interesting timing since I have been searching for over an hour for a poem I wrote 5 years ago about a tree we cut down. My husband finally found it for me on the computer. I want to use it for my blog for June.
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Thinking alike – love it Betty. Nice to have a husband willing to help you search.
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