Off Beat

How broken those with blue hearts
who embrace only poison breezes.

I dance rhythmless,
lingering on an almost stout word

men need cool from voices
baby, girly, cat, no eternity fare

I devour the salty note
bit life surrounding that din.

(Fridays are magnetic poetry)

10 thoughts on “Off Beat”

sgeoil says:

June 7, 2019 at 6:42 pm

Love those first two lines…and then to dance rhythmless…so often that is exactly how life feels!

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  June 7, 2019 at 9:35 pm
  
  It does. Thank you
  
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  1. sgeoil says:
    
    June 7, 2019 at 11:35 pm
    
    You’re welcome.
    
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cindy knoke says:

June 8, 2019 at 12:58 am

Yes, this is wonderful.

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  June 8, 2019 at 9:08 am
  
  Thanks Cindy!
  
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pvcann says:

June 8, 2019 at 11:03 am

I devour the salty note, something to ponder more on.

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  June 8, 2019 at 11:19 am
  
  Thanks….I’m pondering too.
  
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  1. pvcann says:
    
    June 8, 2019 at 7:24 pm
    
    🙂
    
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Carol Anne says:

September 19, 2019 at 1:35 pm

Thats really cool! I love what you did here!

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  September 19, 2019 at 9:03 pm
  
  Thank you. The Magnetic Poetry is fun.
  
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