Money –
that vital ingredient –
threatens to rebuke us,
these haphazard habits
equating to negligence.
Investments –
retirement’s foundation –
falter, then plunge,
a mini crisis hitting
too close to home.
Change –
prodded by re-evaluation –
commands control,
scoffs at ideal’s naiveté,
imperfection highlighted.
(Written for dVerse’s quadrille night, hosted by Whimsygizmo, whose prompt is change. All submitting to Ragtag Community’s, vital; Fandago’s, rebuke; and Manic Mondays 3 Way prompt, imperfection.)
Beautiful Written and so true! 🙂
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Thanks
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Very good use of the prompt. Love it!
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Thanks.
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We all might not like thinking about it but yet so important.
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It is, for sure.
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I leave that to my beloved, she’s a wiz at it all, I’d crash and burn
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I lean more to your side – hate the practical.
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I like the phrase “haphazard habits”. Nice sound and reminder that those now solid habits may have had their origin in what is haphazard.
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Yes. Hard to stay alert.
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“threatens to rebuke us,” such a good description of how cowed we can feel by the struggle to gain and find balance
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Thanks Laura.
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Our expenses always precedes our income & planning contingencies lands us in despair 😩
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Ugh…so true.
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Re evaluation always calls us to task and demands change… Well done!
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Thanks Dwight – finances give me a headache, but it has to be done.
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So true. I too hope things get better.
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Thank you.
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Struggling with finance is tough and I can resonate.. hope everything becomes better! ❤ xo
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Thanks!
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Hope the financial situation gets better. Re-evaluating and revising may lead to good changes, finally.
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Thanks, Grace.
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A serious look at change. Eerily timely, since I just today received the year-end statement on my mutual funds!
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Must be that time of year – not very impressive. Hope things turn around.
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Chasing money is exhausting VJ…
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It sure is…
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I’ve heard how complicated your tax forms are. Hope you find there’s more at the bottom of the barrel than you thought.
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Thanks Jane.
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🙂
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I think this is the bit I related to most
“Change –
prodded by re-evaluation –
commands control,
scoffs at ideal’s naiveté,”
While I try to be sensible with my money, I’m rarely as good as I want to be with it.
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Us too. We set budgets, but impulse gets in the way at times.
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Ouch… to struggle with finance can be very hard… hope everything gets better in the end.
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Thanks – so do I!
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Finances drive me nuts. My sweet wife is the accountant in the family. I even quit going with her to do the taxes; she tells me I ask dumb questions.
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Ha ha ha! I’ll have to try that with my husband, see if he leaves me out.
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Ugh. I understand this, deeply. Hoping it’s fiction. A cool use of the word for today’s Quadrille.
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Not fiction, sadly, but we’ll recover. Just frustrating.
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