Wrapped in reptilian attire, change
climbs aboard my well-intentioned scheme
like a boa constrictor – disarming me
I am more inconvenienced than repulsed –
after all, snake is my power animal,
Or so the seer said…many years ago
Days when I would wear the scaly
comportment of power – invite
transformation- my essence a seeker
But I am trying to settle here –
embrace age and its complications
and yet the serpent persists
Sibilance insisting on co-navigation-
and what will be the outcome, I wonder
if I were to surrender to such a calling?
Change does not heed our fears,
our ego-driven agendas…
It bears its fangs and taunts
I exaggerate the threat, of course-
imagine being consumed or suffocated –
disregard the potential for healing
Have no time for reflection or pause –
the course is already set –
I hold on and feign control
(Art my own)
That is a magnificent piece of art. I just kept staring at it.
I love. your poem, and can relate to:
“But I am trying to settle here –
embrace age and its complications
and yet the serpent persists”
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Thanks. The image came from a dream. He needed a poem
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I read this last night and then again this morning; I felt like I needed a fresh start to truly appreciate your words. I loved “embrace age and its complications / and yet the serpent persists” how well these lines express this tug of our essence that has been there so long against this new body that just does not respond to that pull. What can we do but adjust? I am so grateful though, that you have your words. I feel like we are old friends.
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Oh, and I LOVE you art. Perfect for this poem and so beautifully done.
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🙏😘
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Sorry to fill up your comments so much but I just ran across a poem I keep on my desk that I had not read in a while. It is called “The Way It Is” by William Stafford. It reminded me of your poem and thought I would share. “The Way It Is” by William Stafford – Words for the Year
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Oh, that gave me chills. Thank you!!!
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Oh, LuAnne, your comment brought tears to my eyes. I feel the same way. I know you face the same struggles at your end. Hugs
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Beautiful and true …
‘But I am trying to settle here –
embrace age and its complications
and yet the serpent persists’
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Thanks Roksana
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A wonderful piece of art, VJ, and I love the snake metaphor. Great reading such a relatable poem!
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Thanks so much, Lauren. I love it when readers can relate.
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Artfully created and the snake metaphor is very powerful!
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Thank you!
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I love it…thanks.
Feigning control is what keeps us all unnecessarily busy
I guess…
A nice day to all…
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Yes! “unnecessarily busy” – love it.
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Brilliant, and I do can relate to this….
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Thank you, Janet.
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well written: I can relate to this —
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Thanks John
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The snake metaphor is used very, very effectively in this poem.
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Thanks so much Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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“hold on and feign control.” A mantra! I may borrow it for my own.
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Please do! Thanks
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VJ, I love how you used the imagery of the snake to symbolize the discomfort of transformation, portraying your internal struggle with relinquishing control. This is quite brilliant!
Much love,
David
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Thanks so much David
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Hi VJ, this is a really good poem. I loved your rendition of it.
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Thanks so much Roberta
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That damned change…always getting in the way of equilibrium! Wonderful write.
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Thanks Heather
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You have given us a powerful image here!💕💕
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Thank you, Anne
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The inner struggle…do we give in or ride the tide. Love it VJ. The artwork is spectacular.
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Thanks so much!
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You are so welcome.
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Thanks for sharing this idea and such an poem .Anita
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🥰🙏
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A beautiful work of art VJ. The poem is indeed thought provoking
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Thanks Sadje
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You’re always welcome
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Gosh. Love the imagery, the structure, that powerful end. Pain inspires…and how!
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Thanks Isha
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