Squatters fill the corners
of my unused mind,
a constant clatter
detracting from intention
Incensed by the implication –
how others have used me –
how boundaries have no effect
I demand they leave…
Futility at its best
Then I hear the child cry
a tug on my undernourished heart
certain of her need unattended
I will take her in my arms
seek out accountability
find only neglect
and manipulation
Flatter myself that I, alone
can save her –
let the intrusion be
more fodder, I concede
for the pen…
(Image my own)
Are you sharing your work on Facebook or Instagram? I would love to follow you there as I frequently visit those platforms as opposed to this now.
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Facebook I reserve for my work with Ukrainians, mostly. I do have an instagram account, but have backed off for the moment. @1womansquest.
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Deeply inspired 👌
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Thank you!
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A touching poem, VJ. This artwork is incredible. The colors and swirls set the tone.
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Thank you
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Absolutely beautiful
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Thanks
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Lovely.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome.
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truly relatable and love the tugging compassion so well penned VJ. “a tug on my undernourished heart
certain of her need unattended”❣️
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Thanks Cindy!
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I love the art. And I absolutely relate to the poem.
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Thank you!
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awesome way to share it, bleed it out … like hearing your voice!
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Thanks Kate!
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I can really relate, and especially liked how you phrased the first stanza.
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Thank you, LuAnne!
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Hugs VJ! Give your inner child a big hug from me and mine, too!
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Thanks so much!
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That first stanza is compelling, as is the illustration
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Thanks Derrick
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Powerful writing. And the image is perfect.
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Thank you.
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Haunting, both words and art. (K)
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Thanks K
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And the image is equally as powerful.
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💕
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It’s wonderful to listen to. your voice reading these powerful words….words that definitely resonate with me.
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Thank you, Janet
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There’s a lot to unpack here, VJ. I’ve read it several times, and have not yet explored down all the paths yet.
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Thank you for that encouraging comment.
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I love how you read this poem!
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Thank you, Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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“Flatter myself that I alone can save her” you always have these remarkably, poignant phrases that resonate, VJ.
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Thanks K.
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A heart that’s kind will always be the first one to take responsibility
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What a nice thing to say, Sadje
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😍
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Thanks for sharing idea .Anita
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🥰
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Very touching poem.
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Thanks I.V.
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You’re welcome.
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I relate to this deeply. Thanks for sharing. 🙏💚
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Thank you!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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❤️
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