A branch is falling,
family tree faltering
Where do new sprouts bud
when major limbs have died?
Orphaned mood fearful of rot.
(Tuesdays, I borrow from Twitter @Vjknutson. Image my own)
A branch is falling,
family tree faltering
Where do new sprouts bud
when major limbs have died?
Orphaned mood fearful of rot.
(Tuesdays, I borrow from Twitter @Vjknutson. Image my own)
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Loss of family – related or not – sucks. I loved the way you’ve constructed this visually, VJ.
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Thanks Susi
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You’re welcome!
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Wow,powerful!
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Thank you!
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Working on genealogy projects – this rings so true!
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That’s interesting! Thanks
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It is thoughtful 💖
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🙏😊
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Beautiful! 🙂 ❤
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Thanks Deborah!
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Heavy stuff presented with perfect imagery in appropriate form, well-constructed. Thanks, VJ
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Appreciate your say so, Ron
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Powerful imagery in your Tanka, as is your companying Image
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Thanks Ivor. I know you’ve certainly been through loss
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Yes VJ … I’m the last twig .. 🤗😉
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We had a death in the family recently and this poem totally resonatwa
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My condolences.
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The third and fourth lines are particularly hard-hitting.
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Thanks Liz. I remember when my eldest sister died – she had been sick all of her life – the dynamic of the family changed and it took us a long time to reestablish a rhythm. I fear my mom’s death will do the same.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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