It wasn’t the knowledge of stability –
chaos had the upper hand back then.
It wasn’t even that love was expressed –
unconditional an unheard of concept
It was an unspoken presence
the reassurance of rocks
the irrepressible allure
of a freshwater stream
How a child’s heart
found encouragement
in the whispering wind
solace in the arbored shelter
Naturally the din of home life
overpowered this self-assured
passage, disrupted kinship
and shattered childish faith
But all that is behind now
and when I clear cluttering
thoughts, disperse static
emotions, quiet the heart
The rhythms are still there –
presence offering sustenance…
(Poem first appeared here, January, 2021. Image my own)
Beautiful and well read. Thank you.
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Thanks Paula
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Thanks for sharing this poem . So amazing. Anita
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Always appreciate you, Anita!
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oh such wonderful verses VJ and so relatable of early years with children!
love these last 2 stanzas and your voice!
💗
“But all that is behind now
and when I clear cluttering
thoughts, disperse static
emotions, still the heart
The rhythms are still there –
presence offering sustenance…”
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Thanks Cindy. 💕
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You’re so welcome VJ! 🥰
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Beautiful. You say so much in what I call the negative space. Thank you:)
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‘Negative space” – I love that description. Thanks so much, Janet.
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As a painter I think in the negative space all the time….The Japanese achieve tranquility in their gardens with the superb use of negative space… Enjoy the rest of your weekend. Janet
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You too, Janet. Thanks for inspiring thought. Hope you had a good birthday.
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It’s been a lot of fun…thank you:)
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I love hearing your voice speaking your wise words, VJ. They so resonate with me. I found sustenance back then in two places – nature and books. I still do.
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Oh, yes, definitely books. Thanks
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How a child’s heart
found encouragement
in the whispering wind
solace in the arbored shelter
V.J. I enjoyed this poem, particularly this stanza. It is rather moving to think of a child’s resilience to seek solace from the natural world.
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This was my favorite passage from the poem as well.
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Thanks Liz. I still remember that feeling. Funny
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You’re welcome, VJ. 🙂
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Thanks Heather. Children are so resourceful.
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You’re welcome.
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Superbly recited V.J. … Chaos is a perfect word to describe my unique and hectic back then …
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Thanks Ivor!
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You’re welcome V.J.
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