I attempt to predict
but the future is blank
Snapshots only portray
the past, fragmented
Sunsets might suggest,
birds leak probabilities
But I want to peek
behind the final curtain
Cut through the noise
of popular currents
Life is two-faced
deception paired
And row as I might
fighting the flow
Manna follows its own rhythm
nips at my fears, like a tail wind
Nothing in it but to breathe
Lighten this intense need to know
(Image my own)
Dark, haunting, and beautiful.
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Thank you
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Youโre welcome. ๐
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So nice!
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Thanks
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Oh, you so eloquently express what so many of us struggle with. I think that the only thing we care really KNOW is that not-knowing will always be with us. Beautiful poem, VJ.
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Uncertainty is a given…and a hard pill to swallow. Thanks LuAnne.
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I love your lines VJ.
Wonderful imagery and depth.
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“But I want to peek
behind the final curtain
Cut through the noise
of popular currents
Life is two-faced
deception paired’
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Thank you Cindy!
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You’re welcome VJ! โฃ๏ธ
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Thanks for sharing this..you are an amazing writer. Anita
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Thanks Anita.
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I know just what you mean about lightening the intense burden of the need to know. I can be a very heavy load to carry.
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It can…and paralyzing.
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Yes.
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The words just swirl with a great image VJ ๐
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Thanks!
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Beautifully evoked โค๐ซ๐
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Thank you!
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A lovely poem despite being sad, VJ. It’s full of delicious imagery and metaphors. I especially love the lines-
Sunsets might suggest,
birds leak probabilities
and
Manna follows its own rhythm
nips at my fears, like a tail wind
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Thanks V
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