Is this progress,
this decision to uproot,
cast possessions aside,
free ourselves of ties?
Can his dependency,
my dependency, endure
the transition, released
from former justifications?
We are companions
embarking on adventure,
companions retiring past
lies, redefining possibility
Or, is this more of the same,
artfully camouflaged –
a continuance of flight
from tyrannical origins?
The paths behind are jagged,
wrought with rocks and crevices
and scarred riddles, and yet;
have we not survived? Thrived?
The road ahead is expansive,
our home an ever-changing
landscape, as wide as a continent –
our minds eager to absorb…
This is progress;
we are unburdened,
free spirited, submitting
to new tests of truth.
(Poem first appeared in October, 2017. Image my own)
I enjoyed the reading, hearing where you put the emphasis helped me understand it better. Every change or stage certainly does bring these questions to the forefront. Lovely, VJ!
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Thanks so much, Susi!
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You’re welcome, VJ!
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A beautiful, thoughtful poem, and a beautiful reading, too.
I like how the narrator questions, but ultimately seems hopeful.
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Thanks Merril!
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You’re very welcome!
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You have skills!
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Thank you! Your comment made my day!
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Beautifully read and written. This speaks to me as we face a huge life change in the near future. Timely advice. Thank you. Liana
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I’m so glad, Liana. Thanks for dropping by and all the best.
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There is a lot in this poem, VJ. I love the last paragraph; it makes me think. Makes me want to be open minded to future possibilities. My mind wanders to the heart-breaking events in Florida, and yet I’ve heard some say, they will just move forward, they still have life. It makes me think…
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Can’t wish for a better response, Lisa. It’s hard to make change, but if we don’t have faith in that what do we have.
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I love how you read this poem! Echoing Andrea’s comment, I also love the poem’s movement.
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Thanks so much Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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“Unburdened” ❤️
Powerful, thought provoking poetry, as always VJ.
I love how you let it flowwwwwwww out of you 🌊
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Thanks Andrea.
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