Quiescent, the river
that flows through me
nudged on by a sea
I cannot touch
I am bud resisting
the bloom, reluctant.
If this life is spoiler
for what lies beyond,
then leave me,
dormant…
(Tuesdays, I borrow from Twitter @Vjknutson. Image my own)
Quiescent, the river
that flows through me
nudged on by a sea
I cannot touch
I am bud resisting
the bloom, reluctant.
If this life is spoiler
for what lies beyond,
then leave me,
dormant…
(Tuesdays, I borrow from Twitter @Vjknutson. Image my own)
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This is superb VJ. That last stanza is so good.
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Thanks Kate
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A beating heart?
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Sorry wrong one – this goes with your more recent blog
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A feather floating across the sky
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Very nicely done. And if it is, then send me on!! Great ending!
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Thanks Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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Wow! The last stanza leaves much to ponder! Brilliant piece, VJ!
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Thanks Eugi.
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‘bud resisting the bloom’ …but can it! Beautiful, VJ.
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That’s the question, right? Thanks.
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Right! You are welcome.
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That’s wonderful, VJ. Beautiful.
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Thanks Jeff
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I like especially the river that flows through me
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Thank you.
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This is a good one and so appropriate for life in the world today. At least the world as I see it.
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Thanks Anne. Getting stranger by the day.
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Splendid
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Thanks 😊
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A well-known contemporary Zen Master was asked ‘what happens after Death?’ He replied that he did not know. His questioner protested ‘But you are a Zen Master!’ To which he retorted ‘Yes, but not a dead Zen Master’ 🙏
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Ha ha ha! Love it.
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I’m left a little with a feeling of foreboding. We cannot remain as we are, but yet….Excellent write.
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Thanks Heather.
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You’re welcome.
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I like this poem very much! I’ve saved the first stanza in my “favorite metaphors” folder.
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Thanks Liz. I love that you have a favorite metaphors folder.
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You’re welcome, VJ. I run across so many good metaphors in thw writing community I didn’t want to lose them!
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I looked for your blog and tried to follow you but I don’t think it worked. I’ll try again, not at 5am
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Thank You! Hopefully, the WordPress gremlins will behave themselves.
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I discovered that I am following you.
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Great, thanks!
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A thought provoking poem VJ
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Thanks 😊
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There is something very beautiful in and between these lines, Val.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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