Father demanded first slice of pie
doled out with high brow perfection
anything less unacceptable
Crumbly bits unleashed a tirade
the shame of incompetence
crushing the reluctant server
Oppressed as we were
we children plotted,
sought a suitable revenge
He got his just dessert
cherry with a subtle trace –
scent of satisfaction.
(Note: no parents were killed in the writing of this poem. Image my own.)
There’s something really delicious about your writing, VJ. And I don’t mean the pie. 😉
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Thanks 😊
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Love the image. Good side note (haha). Your humor is on point!
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Thanks 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Subtle trace of spit? 😉
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Well, I left that up to your imagination, lol.
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Well, I went there… LOL
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This made me smile! Good one, VJ!
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I’m glad, Eugi. Thanks.
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Most welcome.
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A nice little revenge fantasy. (I think we’ve all had them at one time or another.)
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Lol. Thanks.
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You’re welcome. 😀
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Getting his “just desserts” – love it. The note made me laugh.
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Lol. Thanks 😊
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I love the title.
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Thanks 😊
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Most welcome
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I can just see those smirks of satisfaction!
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Truth is we were too frightened of our father – this is purely fiction – but wish I’d thought of it back then, lol.
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Even if it is fiction…I can still imagine the glancing looks between the siblings! lol Testimony to a great write!
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Always. Lots of eye rolls.
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Hahahaha. Fine work, VJ.
I thought you might enjoy this:
https://eggsovertokyo.blogspot.com/search?q=conquers
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Ha ha. Good one. Beware those loved ones.
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Well, I always fight to get the last piece of cake, how greedy of me and if it is ice cream consider it gone and inevitably mine. 🙂
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That last piece is always coveted, isn’t it, lol.
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Indeed 😁
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