Have arranged a musical ensemble
to perform for their entertainment
and one guest has already engaged
Now to entertain the children
who bored with the setting up
have gathered to create havoc
Not to mention the cats,
whose presence, unexpected
is threatening my equilibrium
I’m pulling out all the stops here
happiness my number one intent
but the winds have picked up, rain
threatening, and the guests
have wandered inside, away from
the chill and the tents are buckling
and before I can even announce
the days events, the band is leaving
and without a set, it’s a all awash
What ever made me think I could
please them all, control elements
and achieve perfection – hmph!
(For Eugi’s Weekly Prompt: happiness. Image my own)
Happiness, the ultimate.
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Do you think?
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Hahaha, isn’t it what we all week?
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I think it’s one of those words like ‘nice’. What does it really mean? Probably something different for everyone.
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Yes, l forgot there is always individual differences.
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Great post VJ!
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Thank you!
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I get the seriousness of this poem, but honestly, you’ve captured “out of control” in such everyday ways I just had to laugh–the cat and the kids wreaking havoc– Who doesn’t understand that? Super poem!
-Julie
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Thanks Julie. It was tongue-in-cheek. It would be sad if we couldn’t laugh at ourselves
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It never works…the pleasing part.
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No, it does not!
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Such a clever title and piece. Slice of life told in a such a magical way!
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Thanks!
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Welcome!
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Some things are just out of our hands…gotta go with the flow! You always make interesting poems from your dreams!
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Thanks Heather.
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Welcome!
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Love it, rings true.
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Thank you!
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I’ll watch the cats!!!!!
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Deal!
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A story engagingly told! And I love that image – is it a photograph? or a painting? it is so mysterious!
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Thank you. The image is a photograph I played with.
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Oooh, nice.
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So much effort in trying to orchestrate happiness. Your poem really highlights the frustration of this often thankless task. Those on the receiving end usually have no sense of the effort expended by those of us who try so hard. Grrr. And I love your photo – wow!
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Thanks Andrea. When I think of all the events I held in the past, I am exhausted, lol
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Oh, yes, same here. When I see photos of those events I can’t imagine how I did it all.
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This brings back fond and not so fond memories, VJ! Always wanting to please sometimes rewarding and sometimes not. Yeh, I agree – hmph! Stunning read!
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I don’t try so hard anymore. Thanks Eugi.
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❤️
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This proves some things are out of our control. I can feel every word as that happened to me where I wish could’ve managed well. Thanks for giving the nostalgic moments.
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Thanks for reading!
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This one reminded me of days gone by and it made me laugh:)
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Tiring just to think of it, lol
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🙂
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The frustration in trying-to-please + the evasiveness of in-control – VJ you squeezed a LOT into this one poem that resonates resonates resonates. Especially the children who disrupt for the fun of it! (May they grow up to be poets and artists that disrupt in constructive ways … like this poem.)
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I’m sure I was one of those kids (or maybe I still am) lol. Thanks Jazz.
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I love the extended metaphor!
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Thanks Liz. It was a dream, but fits with the prompt.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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