Endings
berry-coloured
sentiments
resting on a shelf
Nostalgia
doesn’t give a lick
about failures
cherishes emotion
No amount
of cunning can erase
the sweet taste
of first love.
(Image my own)
Endings
berry-coloured
sentiments
resting on a shelf
Nostalgia
doesn’t give a lick
about failures
cherishes emotion
No amount
of cunning can erase
the sweet taste
of first love.
(Image my own)
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Lovely…
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Thanks
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I couldn’t agree more with you ๐
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Thanks
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Exactly. Loved it on a first reading. Really appreciated fully on a second one. Love the ending. And: “berry-coloured sentiments” (Very nice!)
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Thanks Benjamin. Romantic poems are unusual for me, lol.
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Well, it was nice to see a bit of it. Maybe another will spring up soon.
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Lol. You never know…
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No. You never do!
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So true, VJ.โค๏ธ
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Thanks Eugi.
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Most welcome!
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Wonderful. Just wonderful.
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Thanks Anne
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Lovely. Why is it some things can never be erased? I like to think some moments in time are eternal. Your poem seems to capture that. It’s not nostalgia. It’s richer than that.
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Thanks Deborah. Well put.
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I canโt seem to turn on site notifications for your blog, V.J. ๐
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Weird. I have that problem with some blogs too. No matter what I do, they don’t show up.
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So true and well said. I especially like “nostalgia/doesn’t give a lick/about failures/cherishes emotion”. There’s so much there.
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Thanks Sarah. Must have been feeling sentimental when I wrote this, lol. Happy Easter lockdown.
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That’s the line that resonates most with me as well. So insightful. (And honest.)
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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