Been riding the down elevator too long
a slight detour, I once, long ago, thought
Ambitions set on Penthouses
and upper echelons of success
First, there is a trip I must make
a downward pull insisting –
See, it isn’t true what they say
that we can be whatever we want
It’s time to stop running,
stop chasing empty promises
I’m getting down to roots
causes and influences
history revealing a legacy
here in the depths of self
a final reckoning that bears light
seems I’ve miscalculated directions
I’ve been riding the down elevator
about to alight on revelation.
(For Reena’s Exploration Challenge #160. Image my own. Hayes is my maiden name.)
a lovely lyrical flow
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Thanks Colin.
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When it’s time for you to alight, I know it will be on the right floor.
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Thanks for the vote of confidence.
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My pleasure. 🙂
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Once down, nowhere to go but up! “It isn’t where you came from. It’s where you’re going that counts.” – Ella Fitzgerald
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Wonderful! Thanks.
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Most welcome!
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pray it’s a life changing revelation, take care precious 🙂
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Thanks Kate. It always is.
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just a shame it’s so damned tough to get there 🙂
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Character building I call it. You’re the best!
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it sure is VJ, thanks … you are the bravest and most creative 🙂
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This is my favorite line from Charlotte Joko Beck: “We have to face the pain we have been running from. In fact, we need to learn to rest in it and let its searing power transform us.” Namaste 🙏
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Yes! Exactly. Thanks for that.
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Going down deep, inward … greater focus with fewer distractions … much to be explored!
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Exactly Jazz – in my case usually a forced descent, but always worth it.
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Going up!
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No place else to go, lol.
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Perhaps sometimes you have to go down to go up? Well done as always.
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…perhaps….thanks Benjamin.
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Welcome!
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