Midnight
and moon casts an eerie light
shimmers of white-kissed fields
Headlights off,
I pause to contemplate the glow
endless skies here beyond city limits.
A herd of deer graze
ignore the hum of idling motor
celebrate the lunar flood.
What drove me here,
I cannot say; perhaps clouds
relentless in February skies.
Or maybe it was another pull,
a knowing, a grace, calling me
to open spaces – an offering
Surreal this suspended moment
stars dispersing sombre greys
tides of emotion releasing
I am transported,
uplifted, encouraged –
Heaven’s stellar promise.
(Inspired by a midnight ride and Eugi’s Causerie prompt of the week: stellar. Image from personal collection.)
I love how this becomes a contrast between the self-determination of driving and choosing to stop and look, and the universe just sitting there in all its glory.
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Thanks Paul. It’s one of those moments that stays in the soul.
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Yes, quite potent.
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beautifully expressed, yup
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Thank you
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Beautifully expressed, VJ.
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Thanks Amy!
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Beautiful! I love the image as well. It gives a mystical feeling while I am reading.
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Thanks for the comment. Glad you like it.
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I like this very much. It’s a transporting kind of poem, one that should read aloud.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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all been said above ‘well written’ ‘uplifting’ .. a really stellar poem!
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Thanks so much, Kate!
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my pleasure VJ
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I can feel the peace of the moment, your words feel like a sighful release….although I’m not sure sighful is a word!
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Sounds good. Thanks.
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These words wrap peace and comfort together. Very nice. A midnight ride sounds just right. 🙂
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Thanks Andrea!
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You’re welcome V.J.! 🙂
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Beautiful night sky imagery….💙🌏
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Thanks Ivor.
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“Uplifted” is how this poem leaves me feeling – thank you! Love the notion of being out w/o any specific reason, just observing sky, deer, inner self …
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Thanks Jazz. This is a memory from when I was a Mom with young children and happened to be out one night (a rare ocurrence).
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I love the moon! Beautiful picture and poem, thanks! 🙂
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Thanks Julie.
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The images in this poem come alive for me. I really like the phrase white-kissed fields.
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Thanks LuAnne – I struggled to find the right words.
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These special moments for ourselves are well-worth the enlightenment and feelings of peace. Thank you for participating,
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Thanks Eugenia. Appreciate your challenge.
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Yes, works for me every time 🙂 Beautifully written VJ.
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Thanks Christine.
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Beautifully written
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Thank you!
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