No matter how
I organize the littles –
set the unruly to task,
orchestrate harmony
from chaos –
critics dismantle
the efforts, find
the loose thread
and tug…
until all
is worthless effort.
Perfectionist’s Bane

Passion for writing ignites my soul's momentum
No matter how
I organize the littles –
set the unruly to task,
orchestrate harmony
from chaos –
critics dismantle
the efforts, find
the loose thread
and tug…
until all
is worthless effort.
Ah, but that’s all a critic knows how to do … This is a reminder that “critic” is not my goal!
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Have to keep her in check for sure.
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We can always find a loose thread, sometimes it is looking beyond the fine details at the whole that counts.
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I have to keep reminding myself
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Not always easy.
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Ah, that critic. She can sit with us but needs to stay in her corner and stop tugging at loose threads that are meant to be loose.
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Exactly! thanks.
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